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This week we focused on revising and getting peer review for our drafts. I submitted my first draft without knowing what type of feedback I will receive. On Tuesday Professor Otte split us up into groups of 3 to give feedback to each other on our technical descriptions. After reading my 2 group member’s papers I was able to provide them with feedback but I also got a few ideas to make my technical description more effective. I also received some very good feedback from my group members such as adding more pictures and fixing some grammatical errors in my draft. In addition, the feedback from Professor Otte was really helpful because I was able to get a specific picture to add that would help my audience picture the Play Station 4 as well as be able to add some minor details within my description.